User talk:Kiyana929/Communication ethics/Psun23 Peer Review

Hey, has left you a really valuable peer review on your article. I urge you to carefully read it and to address as many of her suggestions as you can. Also take another look at the feedback I left on the talk page of your sandbox draft. As I said there, you've done a lot to improve the composition, writing style, and organization of the article, but you still need to make sure that you're citing reliable sources in the Wikipedia style and to include the appropriate wikilinks. Please let me know when you've ready for another round of feedback from me. Groceryheist (talk) 19:28, 3 February 2021 (UTC)