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Food deserts by country  Enter this in Heading font Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Aquilah Daughtery

Australia  Enter this in Sub Heading Font  Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Aquilah Daughtery

In Western Australia, a dearth of high quality and affordable fruit and vegetables in isolated regions was identified as one factor limiting consumption along with produce seasonality.[7] A 2014 review found that the less populous and very remote areas of the state had fewer grocery stores and higher prices for fruit, vegetables and dairy than in the city. Of these stores, 20% did not generally supply produce that met all quality standards with a few exceptions, unlike urban areas with exceptions for lettuce and green beans in Perth.[8] Geographical data were not analyzed for prevalence of low income residents to define areas as food deserts.

A five-year campaign to increase access to healthy foods started in 1990 and led by the Department of Health in Western Australia and industry groups had mixed success.[7] The department later developed a new private/public partnership to address access and consumption of fruit and vegetables.[9] A 2008 audit found some progress generated as a result in incentivizing fruit and vegetable access, but no headway in identifying and addressing any supply issues in development planning or elucidating cost, quality and access issues for remote, rural and urban areas.[9]

··Racial, ethnic, and socioeconomic disparities:

A lead section that is easy to understand   The intro needs to be broken down a bit more, the 1st sentence is a little confusing- Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Aquilah

Neutral content  Excellent at staying neutral Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Aquilah Daughtery — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adaughte (talk • contribs) 05:11, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Draft RubricAdaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC) Aquilah Daughtery

Identifies the Wikipedia entry you will be contributing to? Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Yes, I can clearly see you are writing on food deserts

Provides a “lead section” for a new entry or identifies the sections to be contributed to in an existing entry? Adaughte (talk) 22:10, 1 November 2018 (UTC) This is good, I can see that you're writing on Food deserts in different countries but if you could expand on what your adding to, it would make the next paragraphs more clear.

Your first reference link doesn't workAdaughte (talk) 22:15, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

https://www.theguardian.com/australia-news/ng-interactive/2017/jun/27/australian-census-map-the-results-region-by-region-interactive./ref