User talk:Kjb1902/Abdisalan Sheikh Hassan

Kjb1902
Good search for references! You were also able to fill out all the major sections in your draft. Checked on 29 April 2012. The big problem was when I checked your sources, you had mixed up two journalists; I removed the factual errors that resulted from this mistake. I also edited out the last of the "peacock" and POV statements; Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and so just like the objective era of journalism, "Just the facts!" Submit to Articles For Creation by pressing the submit button on the last remaining banner. Crtew (talk) 00:22, 30 April 2012 (UTC)