User talk:Kjsnguyen/sandbox

Peer Review for Sandbox
United States [edit]

This section can overall be shortened and potentially be added underneath the Legislation and political movements page depending on which state the case belonged to or in the case of the Nancy Cruzan and Terri Schiavo cases, a new section could be added about Supreme Court of the United States cases, as I believe both cases reached the Supreme Court in some capacity. Good job on maintaining neutrality and picking good sources, focus should be on shortening what you want to add to the article, and clearing up the structure.

Ethics (portion will add in)

I overall like this section, giving both the for and against sections 4 bullet points each keeps it balanced. "Decrease in care for patients" should be expanded into something like "A right to die could lead to a decrease in palliative of life care due to the expectation of terminal patents to exercise their right to die" (a shortened version of that) so that the sentence describing the argument is explanatory like it is for the 7 other arguments.

MishaSayenkoCSUEB (talk) 14:01, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi Misha. I fixed the bullet points and made improvements on it. Please check it out and let me know what you think about it. KellyNguyenCSUEB