User talk:Kkapt689/sandbox

Hi Kayley!

I found a couple uncapitalized "I's" in Indigenous, so you might want to give that another read. Maybe you could add a space between the last word and the citation, for organizational purposes. I like how you displayed how to pronounce her last name. The only spelling error I could find was Humour, should be Humor. Very informative, I like how you included all the themes of her experimental videos and films and what they address!

Looks good!

Dmart3223 (talk) 16:43, 15 December 2018 (UTC)Des