User talk:Kkatiekrue/New sandbox

12/4/2018 Evaluation by Emanel2

 * Points: 38/40
 * Grade: 95%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standard 1. In the third sentence of the first paragraph, maybe put the name of the novella in quotation marks? 2. "John Duncan, of the Royal Society of Arts.." - maybe don't need a comma between John Duncan and the next part of the sentence? 3. In the fourth section, the quote is very long? 4. Periods at the end of each sentence in the timeline?

Language
Exceeds Standard - Neutral tone, nice job!

Organization
Exceeds Standard - The organization is great and easy to read!

Coding
Meets Standard - I like how you linked some words to other Wikipedia pages. Maybe do that for a few more?

Validity
Meets Standard - In the last sentence of the first paragraph, the information is somewhat unclear. Maybe change to: "As a celebrated craftsman..." ?

Completion
Meets Standard

Relevance
Meets Standard It is interesting how you combined 'cultural tourism' and a 'history timeline'.

12/5/2018 Evaluation By user:Tholin37
Spelling/Grammar Exceeds Standard

Language Exceeds Standard

Organization Meets Standard

Coding Meets Standard, However id get a second opinion since I;m not the best with coding.

Validity Meets Standard

Completion Exceeds Standard

Relevance Meets Standard

Sources Exceeds Standard

Citations Exceeds Standard

References Exceeds Standard — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tholin37 (talk • contribs) 06:14, 7 December 2018 (UTC)