User talk:Kkatiekrue/sandbox

=Evaluations=

10/16/2018 Evaluation by Emanel2

 * Points: 39/40
 * Grade: 97.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard 1. I think that there should be "was" in this sentence: "..and the iron was used to make cannons and other weapons." (Please add that in the second sentence) 2. "These bells were meant to replace the nine removed from the cathedral during the French Revolution." (It would be better to put a comma between "the nine" and "removed" or to say that "...the nine that were removed...") 3. "..and they fell out of tune causing disharmony when they were rung." (Maybe take out the "were" out of this sentence?) 4. "On February 3, 2013 the nine new bells went on display until February 25, 2013 when they were installed and rung in harmony for the first time." (Maybe put a comma between "February 25, 2013" and "when they were installed"?)

Language
Exceeds standard The language use is great here! I like how you keep the encyclopedic tone throughout the paragraphs.

Organization
Meets standard You organized the section into an easier way to read than the original one.

Coding
Meets standard

Validity
Meets standard All of your information and articles seem to be up-to-date. Even if you look at the dates in your citations, it looks like the sources are within about a five year range of when they were written.

Completion
Exceeds standard You have three high-quality sources. There is a lot of good and solid information.

Relevance
Meets standard

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations World War II is not normally referenced with the digit 2, you'll likely want to change it to II. Also, there is a space needed at the end of the sentence ending with the word liberators (in the second paragraph). Other than that it looks good!

Language
Meets Expectations

Organization
Exceeds Expectations Great opening sentence. It is interesting and made me want to keep reading.

Coding
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Validity
Exceeds Expectations

Completion
Exceeds Expectations Wow you wrote a lot! Well done!

Relevance
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10/17/2018 Evaluation by Benjamin Pocheron

 * Points: 42.5/40
 * Grade: 106.25%

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds standard Nothing to say here.

Language
Exceeds standard Neutral tone for each paragraph.

Organization
Nearly meets standard Each first sentence of each paragraph is a great introduction of what is going to be discussed in that paragraph. Great. However, I would have liked to see more headers and titles so that it just "looks" more organized for the eyes.

Coding
Meets standard

Validity
Exceeds standard The information seems pretty solid.

Completion
Exceeds standard It seems pretty complete.

Relevance
Meets standard I appreciate the respect of the French language and punctuation in the writing of "l'Île de la Cité". Also, when you write "This bell is always rung first, at least five seconds before the rest.", I think it would be great if you add something like "even today", to bring the information back in the present.

11/9/2018 Evaluation by Mariaalto
Spelling/Grammar: Meets Expectations

Language: Meets Expectations

Organization: Meets Expectations

Coding: Exceeds Expectations

Validity: Exceeds Expectations

Completion: Exceeds Expectations

Relevance: Exceeds Expectations

Sources: Exceeds Expectations

Citations: Exceeds Expectations

References: Meets Expectations — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mariaalto (talk • contribs) 21:51, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

11/14/2018 Evaluation by Emanel2

 * Points: 37.5/40
 * Grade: 93.75%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard 1. "HS2, is a high speed transit project from London to Manchester and other northern cities, is to be completed in 2032." I think that this sentence should be like this: HS2, a high speed transit project from London to Manchester and other northern cities, is to be completed in 2032. 2. "The funds are designed to support improved roads [5]," - maybe put the citation after the comma?

Language
Exceeds standard The language use is great. Encyclopedic tone is kept throughout the paragraphs.

Organization
Meets standard

Coding
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Validity
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Completion
Nearly meets standard I would add a little more information for the "Political Devolution" and "Early Economic Indicators of Success for Manchester", if you can find more information.

Relevance
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11/15/2018 Evaluation by Jenjen731

 * Points: 40/40
 * Grade: 100%

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Standard I don't see much errors.

Language
Exceeds Standard Easy to understand.

Organization
Meets Standard

Coding
Meets Standard

Validity
Meets Standard

Completion
Meets Standard A bit more information on the last two sections like Elvira suggested could be good.

Relevance
Meets Standard

11/15/2018 Evaluation by Benjamin Pocheron

 * Points: 40/40
 * Grade: 100%

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Standard Great job

Language
Exceeds standard You kept a neutral tone, great.

Organization
Meets standard The third paragraph might be a little short for a whole paragraph?

Coding
Meets standard Maybe link some concepts to other Wikipedia's page?

Validity
Meets standard

Completion
Meets standard Maybe a little more general detail about the situation?

Relevance
Meets standard