User talk:Kkhari29

Comments on Coursework
Hi Kriti,

You have done a good job of identifying the weaknesses with your article, but near the end of your comment you start to introduce some bias. A better way to talk about it would be to say, you want to add a section to the article that explores current debates as to the appropriateness and fairness of the reservations system.

I would recommend editing what you have written so far to change the last part to more neutral language. After all, Wikipedia requires neutrality.

Prof M Johnson (talk) 03:42, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

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 Lynch 7  17:14, 24 September 2011 (UTC)