User talk:Kkher/sandbox

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Hi. How're you doing? Xengvang (talk) 23:36, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

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This is where the peer review feedback for Kkher's sandbox draft content should be posted. Be sure to sign your post and complete the Canvas quiz to receive credit for your work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 03:42, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Shrinwanti Ghosh Review of This Article
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes,

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes, it has been followed.

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? The author did not include any new information in the writting. So I think this sandbox information is not needed to add to the main article (Gynecomastia).

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? Cytochrome P19 (CYP19) activity in adipose tissue has a relation with gynecomastia. Higher estrogen production is related to an age-related increase in CYP19. If the author would have focused on this point it would be a new contribution to this article.

Shrinwanti Ghosh (talk) 02:27, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

William Eastham Review of Article
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? yes.

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? yes.

Are the citations formatted correctly? yes.

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? I'm assuming this if for the article on Gynecomastia. If it is, then it is unclear what the PCOS information is there for. IF this is for the article on Polycystic ovary syndrome, then the second section might be helpful, but the gynecomastia part doesnt make sense.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? None that I can tell

Pearofapples (talk) 01:32, 23 November 2020 (UTC)