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Business Ethics Article

This article was pretty straight forward. Everything on the article was relevant to the topic of business ethics.However, some topics could have been elaborated on, such as the "History" section of the article. As the article continues it is neutral. This article is simply factual, and from what I can understand, there is no place in this article for any biased opinions. All the citations and link take me to the appropriate wiki page, I do think however, there should be a couple of more link in place for certain phrases such as when the Defense Industry Initiative on Business Ethics and Conduct(DII) was mentioned. According to this article's talk page, it is part of WikiProject Business and rated as a star-class with top-importance, which means the information on this article is significant to other readers and the public, but is still developing. It seems as if the Wikipedians that participated in the talk page made contributions that only improved the article, but not corrected. Kkoha001 (talk)

Nutcrackers

Citation was needed for Nutcracker article. I added the citation reference to the article. The reference I added was regarding the popularity of wooden nutcrackers. Paragraph beginning with "During the Victorian era..."Kkoha001 (talk)