User talk:Kkuffelroy1/sandbox

Hello, some of your sandbox article can be expanded on, and can be formatted into different sections. instead of one big paragraph you can cut down the amount of information and put it into categories. The way you defined the topic is very good, the information is clear and the tone is neutral. There are a few hiccups with this page but overall it has good information. Ewong2188191 (talk) 04:20, 28 March 2019 (UTC)