User talk:Klichte2/sandbox

Abstract: Contains all elements in rubric Mechanism: Very thorough Symptoms: numbers/stats/rates?? more description of symptoms? Diagnosis: good! Cause and prevention: looks good Treatment and Prognosis: mortality rate?? progression?? Recent Research: any more? article citation? Style: good amount of links, looks like it follows the style manual, reading level appropriate Iteachbio27 (talk) 23:50, 22 July 2015 (UTC)Jill

General
You don't need a heading for your page. Wikipedia will do that for you. If you delete that, the rest of your formatting in your table of contents will work better. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

I like that you have an infobox, but clean up the spare tags. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Your linking is looking really good. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Most of this article is very well cited, although there are a few places (like diagnosis) that are missing citations. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Mechanism
Check your formatting on links that aren't showing up properly, like [cell [fusion]] Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Very clear explanation! Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Symptoms
Good list of symptoms with clear explanations of frequency and severity. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Diagnosis
Needs citaitons. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Recent Research
I know you're still looking for more here, which is great. Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Make sure to cite this! Sweiner02 (talk) 16:19, 24 July 2015 (UTC)