User talk:Klm10/sandbox

Review based on WikiEd Rubric 1.1 Introductory Sentence) Excellent. Topic (chemical weathering of feldspars and mechanisms/products) clearly stated concisely in a single sentence at beginning of the first paragraph of edit. 1.2 Lead Summary) N/A contributing to larger article. 1.3 Lead Context) N/A contributing to larger article. 2.1 Organization) Good. Clear organization with appropriate and well-arranged transitions. Well-written in terms of grammar and language. One suggestion is to add a subheading distinguishing that this is relating specifically to chemical weathering of feldspars as opposed to other types of minerals or weathering. I would also think about starting a new paragraph at "The abundance of feldspars in the Earth's crust..." and reword that sentence to avoid the use of abundance/abundant twice. 2.2 Content) Excellent. Contains relevant information regarding the mechanisms and products involved in the chemical weathering of feldspars, as well as physical properties of the mineral that make it susceptible to weathering. 2.3 Balance) Excellent. Article presents information from a balanced scientific perspective with multiple sources of evidence. 2.4 Tone) Excellent. Tone is neutral and appropriate for encyclopedia audience. 3.1 Citations) Good. Maybe add a citation wherever a factual statement is made even if the same citation is used multiple times. It's a bit unclear in places if the info is all attributed to one citation at the end of multiple sentences or not. 3.2 Sources) Excellent. Most sources are reliable and appropriate. 4.1 New Sections) Excellent. Sections added are comprehensive and do not duplicate other sections. Maybe elaborate more on physical properties involved in the weathering of feldspar if available. 4.2 Reorganization) Excellent. Article covers the topic in an organized, logical fashion. 4.3 Gaps) Excellent. Key gaps are filled. Section for proposed edits contains only one sentence as of now. 4.4 Smaller Additions) Excellent. Proposed edits would be added to the relevant section of the article (weathering subheading within feldspar article. 5.1 New Article Coverage) N/A contributing to larger article. 5.2 New Article Body) N/A contributing to larger article. Abicamp (talk) 03:30, 7 December 2020 (UTC)