User talk:Klshetler/sandbox

Rebecca's Peer Review
Make sure to link any words that your audience may not fully know. For example, you could link dwarfism. Even though you explained it, someone might want to learn more about it. I would also explain the FGFR3 gene more and what exactly that does. Make sure to put the references in proper citation, and click the "cite" button next to the sentence you are referencing. You're off to a great start! Keep it up!

Rlstatton (talk) 20:17, 13 September 2018 (UTC) Rebecca Statton

included a review of the article
I see your references at the bottom, but you should use the "cite' tool to add what information is taken from what reference. That way it looks nicer and plagiarism won't be an issue. Also you mentioned what gene is causing the Achondroplasia but did not mention how this gene (or gene mutation) is doing. Is the translated protein causing problems or is the gene itself unable to transcribe into a functional protein, etc. Further elaboration would be helpful but you have the bedrock for a good article. Excited to read more in the future. Zach S.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Znsherman (talk • contribs) 20:09, 16 September 2018 (UTC)