User talk:Kltk78/The Fall Of Atlantis

Review
Hey, just from a brief glance at the article: here are my suggestions,
 * 1) cut down the plot, remember WP:Summary style
 * 2) focus on the Real World content, use newspaper reviews, journal articles and reputable websites for this
 * 3) also the lead sounds like advertisement

Hope that helps, Sadads (talk) 21:54, 16 July 2010 (UTC)