User talk:Kmashal/Pressure Sensors

Kal,

This is an OK start, but you need to turn it into more of an article, less of a list.

In the opening paragraph, start with a formal sentence definition of pressure sensor. Then write a few more sentences extending the definition. And say something about the general about the different types and applications, as an overview.

Then in the subsections, provide more discussion of each type. I suggest that you get away from the list format and write in paragraphs.

Take another crack at it and let me see it again. If you want to go over it in person I would be happy to try to meet with you.

joe