User talk:Kmcveety

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Jmwisebird (talk • contribs) 06:26, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

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Kmcveety Peer Review - QuintinK
These are in order through the article.

1.) Consider changing "Vonda Neel McIntyre (born Louisville, Kentucky, on August 28, 1948) is an American science fiction author." to "a Pacific Northwest science fiction author."

2.) Consider changing "Den Haag, Netherlands" to "The Hague, Netherlands"

3.) Specify that she earned a BS from UW in the next line.

4.) Link to Susan Janice Anderson's page, if she has one.

5.) I prefer "invented" to "came up with" in regards to Hikaru.

6.) Instead of "Recurring Story Elements", "Recurring Themes" is a more technical section title.

7.) The first sentence of the section is also poorly worded.

8.) The rest of it, including her works, look good.

Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by QuintinK (talk • contribs) 01:31, 2 December 2013 (UTC)