User talk:Kmehta92/sandbox

I like the topic you choose, and your article is very well written. I would use more links especially for the scientific words, for a person who does not have a scientific background. For diagnosis try to explain more details about the tests. Are there any alternative treatment? And how about the life expectancy? For now I think this is a good start and you are doing a great job. Sabrina Lira

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Hey sorry I'm doing this so late but a series of events prevented me.

Hey, I don't know how you were able to put the abstract above the table of contents but good job on that cause I failed horribly. Going off that, you abstract is right on, very concise and too the point and digging the demographics part of it.

For the symptoms, are there any warning signs? Also, this is just me, but bullet pointing the symptoms gives it a crisp aspect to a wiki page rather than searching through the paragraph to find them.

Are there any prevention methods? Life expectancy? Holistic care?

All in all, your wiki page seems to be on the right track before hitting it out of the ballpark. I know it must be difficult finding information for a empty wiki page but keep at it. Good luck with everything and nail this coffin shut. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jijungkim (talk • contribs) 02:50, 14 November 2015 (UTC)

50.151.93.99 (talk) 06:39, 19 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Great abstract, very clear summary.
 * Try to add more wiki links for difficult terms.
 * Nice description of symptoms.
 * Mechanism could use a lot more clarification and detail. What do we know about the connection between the virus and the symptoms? How does it cause them?
 * What are the key identifying features for diagnosis?
 * Still waiting on recent research. If you're having trouble finding articles, come talk to me.
 * Treatment and diagnosis are missing citations.