User talk:Kmvogel2/sandbox2

Hey- You have a lot of information that is clearly organized which is good. I'm not really sure on the formatting of the compound name above the table of contents though. Usually that section is just a little paragraph that summarizes info on the compound. Also, a suggestion is moving the fact that this compound causes irritation from the properties section to the hazards/safety section. I also noticed an error in your references that should be taken care of. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.

(Ann Lucenko (talk) 21:38, 1 November 2012 (UTC))

Hi- Your page is in good shape. A few things though- there is an odd title at the top that needs to be fixed. Also, I would add a picture of your compound to the top of you chembox. Add more information to your intro section under "4-fluorobenzoic acid". Your first sentence under occurrences is actually the appearance and that should go under the properties section. Then make the uses section an actual section head. Do not have treatments in safety- the head react people told me to take mine out so you should do the same. Fix up your one error on the sources and that should be it! Good Job.

(Ryanhan2 (talk) 21:42, 1 November 2012 (UTC))