User talk:Knc459/sandbox

Julia's Peer Review This is really good, it is balanced, Love the added oath, it really makes it look good! Juliamboe07 (talk) 13:09, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

This is very well written information. My only critique would be to take the Senate Speaker part and not have it in bullet points but make it into a big paragraph. Other than that, great job! User:Korrynlom

This was a great couple of additions for the Tennessee Senate article. Like Korryn said, the oath was a super cool thing to add, because it adds some depth to the article and some validity to the writers. I would also agree with Korryn on the fact to make the bullet points into a written out paragraph and add some more detail. Overall, great job! user: Mnicoll123 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mnicoll123 (talk • contribs) 23:34, 15 April 2019 (UTC)