User talk:KodiceJames/sandbox

Good information and explanation. I would definitely question the use of the term "aesthetics" in the sentence "Shinto Buddhism is one of the main aesthetics Japan has to offer," though you may be right. I would suggest something more toward "The main aesthetics of Japan are derrived from Shinto Buddhism," as religions are generally religions and not art styles per se. Sylipen (talk) 20:13, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

This info is great! I really like how you go in-depth into the history of Shintoism and Buddhism and explain how they had some of the biggest impacts. My only comment would be to read your info out loud, to make sure your sentences flow well and fix a few minor grammar errors. Otherwise, great job! Maddyz1415 (talk) 01:27, 14 March 2019 (UTC)