User talk:KohakuHearts/sandbox

Yannick

This topic should be fine. Find a couple of recent reviews to get you started. This is a pretty broad topic; you might want to watch for a couple of clear examples. TomHaffie (talk) 00:44, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Yannick

Great start. You should add links to other WP pages as appropriate. Try to tighten up the writing to reduce your word count. I think you could challenge yourself to remove 20% of your words without losing meaning. Maybe have a colleague not familiar with the topic read it over for clarity. Your headings should be in proper WP format. Grade 1.75/2 TomHaffie (talk) 00:48, 11 November 2014 (UTC)