User talk:Komedia Bath

Komedia
Regarding the Komedia article. Thanks for your input, but, it looks as though you just pasted in one of your press releases, it includes hyperbole that has no place in an encyclopaedia. Take a look at some other articles to get a feel for the style used on Wikipedia - you shouldn't use flamboyant flowery terms such as "Komedia Bath operates in the beautiful..." and "Cornerstones of the programme...". If you include too much unnecessary, non-notable, detail it will be removed as it appears to be advertising rather than informative to the reader. If you are going to add information about your own organisation, please take note of 'FAQ/Organizations', write with a neutral point of view and provide references to your claims. Thanks. Lopifalko (talk) 13:07, 19 December 2012 (UTC)