User talk:Konamalo/sandbox

Your outline looks good. Great work! Bridges2Information (talk) 21:00, 7 May 2019 (UTC)

Also, I forgot to mention that you did a thorough and useful evaluation of the article! Bridges2Information (talk) 21:06, 8 May 2019 (UTC)

The parts you have finished look great! The it seems well sourced and contains all the important information on her. The one thing I might consider adding to her page, or at least looking into, would be her relation to and impact to racism. Since she was a white, activist, democrat, suffragette in Oregon at the nadir of race relations in the US it seems likely that she had influence in race relations. Especially when she was in women's medicine right as planned parenthood was being set up (in 1916). (If you don't know the history of planned paranthood's founding https://studentsforlife.org/high-school/planned-parenthood-and-racism/ ). I really do like you article though! ScienceMusical 18:34, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

That's a thoughtful suggestion,. If you can find any information about this, it would be interesting, and hopefully she did more to fight racism than many of her peers -- she was very well travelled and worked all over the world, so I'm hopeful. This article is so interesting - and I'm entertained that her dad jumped a ship. I'm a little confused about what happened afterward...did he stay in the American for three years and then his family from England finally joined him?