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Article Evaluation - Unit 3

Behavioral Sciences

Behavioral Sciences is dealing with human actions. this field usually involves sociology, anthropology, behavioral aspects of biology and more. this is an approach that considers more experiments to come to a conclusion. this study is interesting because it looks over the behavior on both the rational and relational level.

evaluating content: everything in this article was relevant to what my topic what over. this article went into detail about behaviors through objective conclusions and experiments. one thing that did not really distract me but caught my eye was when the article started talking about how behavioral sciences can be confused with social sciences. when this got brought up, it kind of confused me but i kept reading it over and over then finally got it.

this page was last edited on January 3, 2019 so it is up to date. i thought that it could of gone into a little more detail about this topic to help me understand it a little more in depth. other than that, i didn't really notice anything needing to be improved.

evaluating tone: there was not one specific subject that was particularly discussed more than any others.

i did not notice anything that could of been over represented or underrepresented.

evaluating sources: the links do work if you click on them. yes the source supports what i am claiming about my article.

yes they come from good places, for instance: merriam webster, business dictionary. i would say yes because you can trust the sources to get information from them.

Copy Edit an Article
Southerners have been found to have higher levels of gun ownership than persons who reside elsewhere. This may be due to cultural factors peculiar to the Southern region. If so, this would have interesting implications for gun control initiatives. Although, the differential in gun ownership has been linked to varying support or opposition to gun control, the relationship between this variable and specific types of gun control has not been examined. With this in mind, we investigate how specific types of gun ownership interact with Southerners, controlling for the effects of other variables, to determine preferences for three different types of gun control.

http://eds.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.shsu.edu/ehost/detail/detail?vid=6&sid=b6b47edd-d91d-4b28-9bfd-41abee7b3240%40sessionmgr102&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=56521895&db=cja

The people who do not agree willsay that the Second Amendment protects an individual’s right to own guns; that guns are needed for self-defense from threats ranging from local criminals to foreign invaders; and that gun ownership deters crime rather than causes more crime.

https://gun-control.procon.org/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kortiee (talk • contribs) 17:53, 21 March 2019 (UTC)

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The United States has 120.5 guns per 100 people, or about 393,347,000 guns, which is the highest total and per capita number in the world. After looking at some calculations, about 22% of Americans own one or more guns (35% of men and 12% of women). America's pervasive gun culture stems in part from its colonial history, revolutionary roots, frontier expansion, and the Second Amendment, which states: "A well regulated militia, being necessary to the security of a free State, the right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed."

Proponents of more gun control laws state that the Second Amendment was intended for militias; that gun violence would be reduced; that gun restrictions have always existed; and that a majority of Americans, including gun owners, support new gun restrictions.

Opponents say that the Second Amendment protects an individual’s right to own guns; that guns are needed for self-defense from threats ranging from local criminals to foreign invaders; and that gun ownership deters crime rather than causes more crime.

https://gun-control.procon.org/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kortiee (talk • contribs) 18:50, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

PART C
More gun control laws are needed to protect women from domestic abusers and stalkers

Five women are murdered with guns every day in the United States. [10] A woman's risk of being murdered increases 500% if a gun is present during a domestic dispute. [11] During the Iraq and Afghanistan wars, 5,364 US soldiers were killed in action between Oct. 7, 2001 and Jan. 28, 2015; between 2001 and 2012 6,410 women were killed with a gun by an intimate partner in the United States. [10] [12] A 2003 study of 23 populous high-income countries found that 86% of women killed by firearms were in the United States and American women are 11.4 times more likely to be the victims of gun homicides [13] 57% of mass shootings involved domestic violence. [11] [14] For example, the 2011 mass shooting at a Seal Beach, CA hair salon reportedly began because of the shooter's custody battle with his ex-wife who was a hair stylist at the salon. [11] [8] 31 states do not ban convicted misdemeanor stalkers from owning guns and 41 states do not force convicted domestic abusers from relinquishing guns they already own. [10] [14] 76% of women murdered and 85% of women who survived a murder attempt by an intimate partner were stalked in the year before the murder or murder attempt. [15] https://gun-control.procon.org/

option B

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 * 1) Stachelberg, W., Gerney, A., Parsons, C., & Knauss, M. (n.d.). Preventing Domestic Abusers and Stalkers from Accessing Guns. Retrieved from https://www.americanprogress.org/issues/courts/reports/2013/05/09/60705/preventing-domestic-abusers-and-stalkers-from-accessing-guns/

-secondary -scholarly — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kortiee (talk • contribs) 14:50, 1 April 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Brusk, K. (2014, July 31). Gun laws still don't protect women from abusers: Column. Retrieved from https://www.usatoday.com/story/opinion/2014/07/30/gun-control-deaths-women-column/13332165/

Part D

 * i want to know more about what happened to the castle. the article says nothing about why it is no longer there.
 * where was the castle located? the article states that the location isnt certain, so how do they know the remains are to that specific castle?

Set of terms
 * Norman era
 * history of the West of Ireland
 * Castle Connor
 * Annals of Connacht, 1245)
 * 1641 rebellion

https://kilmacteige.com/castle-connor-history-oconnor-sligo/
 * The original – Castle Connor – (as it is now called) was reputed to be built by Piers de Birmingham (de Bermingham), part of the Norman Invasion.
 * The Norman invasion was a watershed moment in the history of Ireland – marking the beginning of more than 700 years of direct English and, later, British involvement in Ireland and the Plantation of Ireland with the Protestant Ascendency.
 * History and Maps would show that the name Castleconnor 200 years prior to Conor O’ Dowd’s Castle and was most probably named after O’Connors of Sligo the overlords of Tireagh.

Summary CastleConnor, like the entire area, is ancient and modern History can tell Us much of the past History that was recorded, but the unrecorded is lost to History for the most part. One could probably spend a lifetime digging into it and many have done so to bring us what We know today including the Norman Invasion of Ireland. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kortiee (talk • contribs) 02:05, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia Part A
music - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Anoushka_Shankar.jpg

i chose this because it shows a womans love for music. this demonstrates to show your passion and fulfill your dreams. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kortiee (talk • contribs) 15:40, 25 April 2019 (UTC)

Article - Behavioral Sciences
evaluating content this article talks about this subject very well. it has its sections to help better understand the subject. it was neat to read this information and learn how much more information i did not have a clue about. nothing on this page would be considered distracting or anything. although, it would of been nice to have a little more information. the last edit was May of 2019 so it is well up to date.

evaluating tone there really is not a type of tone for this subject, more of a fact based. the links added to this page do work correctly to get you to that area.

checking the talk page the conversation was fairly recent, was last edited in february 2019. this person talked about animal rights rather than human behavior science. all of the links work for this page. it was a well constructed article and a good one to read about.