User talk:KortniEditor/Zaman Ali Ibrahim

Critique
Work on the lead!

Why is this journalist important? The big issue is that the summary of the notability up top is absent and the expansion under impact is also not started. Why is he important?

You need to collect more information from other sources. You may be using CPJ, but what about RSF? Look at http://tribune.com.pk/story/141847/homicide-newspaper-reporter-shot-dead/ or http://islamabadpost.com/english/2011/04/05/journalist-guns-down-in-karachi-due-to-internal-rift-of-ruling-party/

Cite all your work and use inline citations. More info about this can be found at  cite a source or check your facts or  use inline citations.

Create internal and external links.

Enter the information you know in the infobox!

Put another big effort into it! Crtew (talk) 05:34, 27 October 2011 (UTC)