User talk:Kotvim

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Pol430  talk to me 17:54, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 13:00, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Review of "Eran Algor" Article
Hi Excirial,

I trying to add this article but you wrote that the article doesn't have "Reliable sources". I added all the resource I found about him, what else I need to add for this article get approved? He currently showing in places that doesn't have a website or something I can link for. there is anything specific in this article that need reliable sources?

The link for the article is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Eran_Algor


 * Hiyas Kotvim,


 * In order to warrant an article on Wikipedia, an article should indicate why someone is sufficiently notable to warrant encyclopedic inclusion. Most times this is done trough adding reliable sources, which let the article meet the golden rule for inclusion - these reliable sources are also used to verify the content that is in the article, which is absolutely mandatory for biographical content. Right now i can see no sources whatsoever in the article i'm afraid. There are several external links, but personal websites and youtube don't qualify as reliable sources.


 * If Eran Algor is notable, there must be something written about him in a reliable source (Such as a newspaper, major news website and so on). Note that this content must be about him, and must verify what is written in the article (For example: You would need a source verifying his birth date and other claims).  Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 18:02, 9 May 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Cheers! Stella BATPHONE GROOVES  01:06, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. The submission has not been accepted because it included copyrighted information, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 00:36, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

advice
You essentially copied the article from http://www.heichal-rishon.co.il/index.php?goto=bep&page_from=1140. This is not permitted, and, as reviewing administrator,  I have deleted the material. Try again, if you can meet the conditions I'm going to explain below, but write it yourself in your own words, using previously published material as a source.

But keep in mind the following:

A Wikipedia article needs to show notability with references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. The references submitted were essentially press releases, and not acceptable.

Further, the naotabiliuty of an artist is given at WP:CREATIVE. Essentially this requires works in major museums or other collections, and published independent reviews of the work. If this is not available, there is not yet material for an article, and there is not point in trying. A Wikipedia article needs to be written like an encyclopedia article, not a press release--don't praise the organization or person, say what they do. Don't talk about the overall artistic aims of the person, unless these have been published in outside sources. Talk about where they have exhibited, wherat mueseums hold their work, what published critics have said of it. Remember not to copy from a web site, even your own -- first it's a copyright violation, but, even if you own the copyright and are willing to give us permission according to WP:DCM, the tone will not be encyclopedic and the material will not be suitable. (Thus, there is generally no purpose in giving permission; it is better to rewrite.)

Include only material that would be of interest to a general reader coming across the mention of the subject and wanting the sort of information that would be found in an encyclopedia. Do not include material that would be of interest only to those associated with the subject, or to prospective clients/purchasers/students--that sort of content is considered promotional. Do not   think  of what the subject wishes to communicate to the public, but  of what the public might wish to know.

I apologize on behalf of Wikipedia for some of the    earlier reviewing of the article, that gave you no clear indication of what was wrong. (except for Exciral, who gave you advice you would have done well to follow) Unfortunatley, just as anyone can edit, anyone can reviews, and  the results are not always as helpful as they ought to be.  DGG ( talk ) 00:43, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Nomination of Eran Algor Groskopf for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Eran Algor Groskopf is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Eran Algor Groskopf until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion template from the top of the article.  DGG ( talk ) 19:05, 2 September 2012 (UTC)