User talk:Kovarmcclure

Further comments

 * Thank you for the PD note. I am assuming that the IMDB page is a copy of your web site and not visa versa. If you can add a PD disclaimer there too, that would be good; if not, mention on the article talk page that it is copied from your PD personal page, with a link to that page, otherwise it may be deleted as copyright of IMDB again
 * In any case, I suggest that you vary the wording to make it less of an exact copy
 * You will need to add the following to the talk page of your article
 * I've already made comments about the tone and the need to give your roles in the filmography; "third policeman" type parts aren't notable, whereas a major role is
 * You seem to think your notability largely rests on Cleo Award winning-superbowl "VW Mini Darth Vader" commercial as the Dad, but as it stands, that means nothing to me. It's not referenced, and there is no link to a Wikipedia article about the award or to an article about the advert. As it stands, it's not clear to a reader if the award itself is significant, and I don't know if the role of "Dad" is significant within the advert.
 * I'll shortly restore a slightly edited version of the text here

Jimfbleak - talk to me?  05:41, 14 July 2016 (UTC) Kovarmcclure/sandbox