User talk:Kpaon1/sandbox

peer review
The way that you address the topics makes sense and you show that you have evidence to back up the things that you want to change. you give a link and evidence from a research paper as well, so I think the edits you will be making are good. I think that you should go along with all the things you are planning to say because it will give the sections more details and allow readers that do not know much about the topic or topics to really understand what is being said. when reading our edits I don't see any bias so this follows what a wikipedia page should be like. Also the way you set up your information is good because it leads up to the end result/idea.