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Article Evaluation

In reading the article on Juvenile Idiopathic Arthritis, the topic seems to be fairly well covered. Most of the information is relevant to the topic, but could be stated differently for a better understanding. The article's information appears to be neutral and focuses on facts versus persuading of one way or another. The role of occupational therapy is stressed greatly, where there was not much information on physical therapy's role in this diagnosis. The page has 51 sources, most seeming to be credible and are capable of being found. However, most of the sources are from 2012 and older. It would be beneficial to add more recent literature and sources. The talk page of this article has had a couple comments, but has not had an in-depth discussion or analysis. We have yet to talk about this diagnosis in class, but believe that it could have more detail. Kplourde8 (talk) 23:20, 16 September 2017 (UTC)

The section stating the symptoms and how it presents itself is not clear, and could be rewritten. Should the numbers be written out? Risks and the epidemiology of this disease are also not clear within the writing, and could be written in a more understandable way. Kplourde8 (talk) 00:31, 8 October 2017 (UTC)