User talk:Kporras5/Gloria Arellanes

Peer Review
I really enjoyed reading this article, especially because I didn’t know who Gloria Arellanes was previously. I find this article fairly well along its way to being well-developed. I thought that the Brown Berets section was especially interesting and well fleshed out, and I love how you linked to the Brown Berets Wikipedia page. Within the lead section, it may be helpful to provide a couple of short descriptions of Brown Berets, Las Adelitas, The Chicano Movement, and Chicana Feminism. While many of the facts are connected with citations, it would strengthen your Wikipedia article to add citations to make sure each sentence has a verifiable source. I was also really intrigued by Las Adelitas, and I would love to learn more. It would be really wonderful if you added more to this section and provided more context about what the group did and what their impact was. This article is really impressive because it brings attention to an activist figure who is often not talked about, and I would love to see more about where Gloria is now or, if she has passed away, some more about what the impacts of her life have been, along with a photo of her. Skmpark (talk) 03:21, 3 December 2021 (UTC)