User talk:Kporras5/Gloria Arellanes/Andreaplascencia Peer Review

The article is underdeveloped in its current state, but is on its way to achieving development with the incorporation of secondary sources and general modification. The topic of the article, in general, is very compelling. I had not previously heard of Gloria Arellanes myself, and in general, the Chicana movement is one that not much is known about. For this reason, the topic is incredibly relevant and worthy of research— especially as it relates to a woman who was so heavily involved in the movement. Again, its discussion of an underrepresented woman/movement is a strength, but it lacks in its actual development. It relies too much on autobiographical accounts. Your ideas seem very strong. Embedding these ideas into the article, plus supporting them with reliable secondary sources, would establish this article as well-developed. I would especially suggest expanding upon the section titled “Las Adelitas de Aztan.” I’d never heard of this movement before, so if you could include more information about what the women involved sought to achieve, how long this organization ran, how it came to be and where it stands today, I think you’d be in a very strong position. Otherwise, good job!

Andreaplascencia (talk) 21:08, 6 December 2021 (UTC)