User talk:Kragw/sandbox

Hi! Some notes on your edits: -I think that you do a good job of keeping a neutral point of view and using the "wikipedia tone"! -It might be better to "overcite" than undercite... maybe add some citations more frequently throughout your paragraphs, for example, even though you cite the 2011 study at the end, maybe cite or link to it as right at the beginning, so that the reader can click on it / check it right away. -"this data can show that the simplicity for the platform and the methods for searching through large amounts of information was simple, and attractive to people who do not have much time. " is this your own opinion? by saying "this data can show"..maybe there is another way to conclude the evidence you mentioned?