User talk:Kralph1/sandbox

BCarmichael feedback
Great article to make a contribution! Be sure that you are proof-reading to catch missing words including on the Talk page. The references used are related to the event, but are news media outlets. Challenge yourself to locate peer-reviewed scientific sources or governmental sources. Also, a portion of the contribution you indicated adding was there previously. Please be clearer on what is new content added and what has been revised as well as why. More could be stated about why this is a storm complex, how it forms, and the frequency with which such events occur. El Nino was an appropriate link to include – are there others that could be added? BCarmichael (talk) 03:29, 11 October 2016 (UTC)

MMcca44 Feedback: May 2016 United States storm complex
You added quality information to a wikipedia article that was lacking depth. You did a excellent job of not only making additions to the article but editing and improving the information that was already there. Your rephrasing and clarification of the information about Statewide Disaster Proclamation is strong. Your connection between the storm complex and the El Nino climate cycle gave this article more depth. I think your addition of a wiki link to the phrase "El Nino" was needed because it allows the reader to better understand how the climate change was a causing factor of the storm complex. The only thing that I would have to say is maybe you could add a few more statistics or numbers. Since it was such a recent event I understand if there isn't a lot of sources published about the storm complex, but there aren't a lot of solid statistics in the article and a few good numbers could maintain the reader's interest as well as give them a more complete understanding of the severity of the May 2016 United States storm complex. Overall great edit and addition! Mmcca44 (talk) 00:47, 3 November 2016 (UTC)mmcca44