User talk:Kreidy

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Hi Kyle!

I read through your wikipedia article and I thought it was great. It was very easy to read the summary and it will definitely be a great asset to those who don't read the work itself. I also really like the analysis and criticism section because it allows you to see what classical scholars have to say about the play. One thing I would like to see, though, is a section on the characters in the play. I noticed there's a text box on the far, upper right-hand side, but when I was reading your summary, I didn't really have much background information on these characters. I would also suggest adding more information to the lead section. Other than that, you're article was clear and concise and all the sources check out and there weren't any grammatical mistakes. :) -Adán Adangonzalez395 (talk) 08:00, 31 July 2017 (UTC)