User talk:Krish!/Archive 1

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Priyanka Chopra
J.Lo has released about 12 albums and Chopra has released 0 thus far, so they are not in the same class in that respect. Her music career is mentioned in both the lead and in a separate section, so I think that is good enough for now. If and when Chopra becomes more known as a recording artist than an actress, then the article will certainly be updated to reflect that. As of now, it is pretty clear that she is an actress, who is just getting started in music.

Another issue: Don't you think it would be better for an editor with more experience to review the article for GA? BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  13:04, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

Re: Please help the song article In My City from being disaster
Hi. How are you doing? First of all, there is no need for you to call me "Sir". It seems strange. Lol. Call me Jivesh like everyone does. I will be happy to help you. I had a look at the edits of the other editor and it seems that he does reference everything he adds. According to me, the problem lies in the fact that both of you want to work on the same article. So why you befriend him or at least talk to him so that you can both contribute constructively to the article? To render things easier, you can both use a sandbox. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:01, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I am sincerely happy to see that you took my words into consideration. It's important for both on you to reach a meeting ground as both of you have the right to edit the article but you should not spoil it. Let me know what he says. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:18, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * An article should at least be one year old before taking it to FAC. "In My City" looks generally solid. The first two sections are awesome. The rest could largely be improved but it is too early as even the music video has not come out. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:27, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Of course I can but as I said above, this article is a new one. We should wait for the song to make some impact on some international charts and see if the video garners enough critical reception etc. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:35, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Biography pages are not really my forte. But I will still have a look later. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 17:43, 15 November 2012 (UTC)

Talk:In My City
Please discuss it in Talk:In My City on the RFC section. Thank you Jim1138 (talk) 08:54, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

Pink
Hey Pks. Can you please lighten your pink background per WP:SIGN. I'm not able to read the black text against the dark pink background and it is causing a bit pain in my eye. Cheers!  TheSpecialUser TSU 01:37, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Re:Warning
Hi Pks,

I posted the warning because we should comment on articles rather than critisize editors with racism and in a way stalk users. Please don't be offended by this message; this message is posted as a reply.

by Kevin12cd  Talk to me  This was posted at  20:49, 4 December 2012 (UTC)

Re: Congratulations for FA
Thanks a lot. :) -- smaro jit  (buzz me)  04:24, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

Your edit
I have noticed that you are improving from the last two days. If you check the talk page of Priyanka Chopra, I had just mentioned that "Pks is really improving" and I'm liking it. I do apologize if my above notification depressed you, it wasn't my intention. If you don't understand something or why something else gets removed, you are absolutely free to ping me and badger me till you get clarifications. Again, I can see that you are improving. But take it one step at a time. You will do good. :) — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 04:37, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your words nut I want to say that we should work collaborately on Any articles, so that it benefit the article a lot and I want to ask if can make an FL of List of Chopra awaards as we need more of those FL too.Pks1142 (talk) 04:48, 8 December 2012 (UTC)

Priyanka Chopra
Okay, here is how I see it. She has been doing films for 10 years, and recording albums for 1 year (really less than that). Naturally, one would expect the the film content in the article to be 10 times greater than the music content. It is very simple for an impartial person to understand. You can add more music content in articles about her songs, which you have already done, and the album when it comes out. But in her biographical article, it has to be balanced. You have to avoid WP:Undue and WP:Recentism, among other policies. I am going to try to push this article to FA, since she is becoming known in America now, but it can not happen if people try to turn it into a fansite. I hope you can understand where I am coming from on this. Remember that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a repository for every snippet of info about certain stars. BollyJeff &#124;  talk  13:20, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * India today links are not dead (last time I checked), but the Checklinks tools thinks they are. I have not figured out how to get around this.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  21:04, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Please do not add any more minor "honors" to the PC main page. That can be put in the awards sub-page.  We should not duplicate everything on both pages, but add only the most prestigious ones here.  Also, please look at the reference formatting that is used throughout the article, and make new stuff match.  You did better this time, but its not quite perfect.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  18:36, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'm improving day by day and wanna say thanks to you and you let others to do theiet work on articles. How about your FAC preparation for Chopra article. I am thinking of List of awards and nominations by Chopra to be a FL.What's. Say.Pks1142 (talk) 18:52, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I am surprised to see that on Vidya Balan, so sorry about that. You don't have to copy everything from one article to another though. I was also upset because you messed up the formatting.  Several sentences turned bold and italic.  Do you not even look at your work when done?  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  20:13, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Again, don't blindly revert without understanding why something has been removed, and without reading the edit summary. Have you not been told to do this before? Shall I show you the notifications regarding this? — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 04:18, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
 * The music award source says the 3 noms are for Best Debut, Best Song and Best Video, not what you have written. BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  15:07, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't understand your reply. The text and source need to match.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  17:03, 10 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay, I put the actual pages from the awards site now. BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  17:29, 10 December 2012 (UTC)

RE: Personal Attacks
You should read the article on personal attacks coz it seems as though you don't know what qualifies as an attack. Also, have a look at your mistakes before accusing people of attacking you. You undid my edits even though I had provided VALID reasons as to why I reverted yours. The Priyanka Chopra is a GA and a potential FA article, It needs to be stable. So please don't keep adding trivial stuff, text that is not present in the source and unnecessary additional words. BTW, I'm always polite and friendly with my fellow editors. Ask anyone! You on the other hand seem to have issues with everyone! Anyway, Good luck to you! GleekVampire (talk) 07:39, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait a minute, I had issues with everyone??? No I only was having an issues a only with IndianBio but we sorted it out and now we often help each other. So don't say again and also I reverted your edit without seeing that's why I didn't reverted back after yours but you said nonsense which hearted my sentiments. So lets work together. Ok Pks1142 (talk) 07:55, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry if my comments hurt your sentiments. It wasn't my intention at all. I just have a tiny request, please read the edits before undoing/reverting them. I've been working with BollyJeff on this article for quite a while now and we really want it to become a featured article. If you have any questions concerning my edits then please ask me on my talk page or the article's talk page before making any big changes. Like I said earlier, the article needs to be stable. You're a good editor and I'd love to work together. GleekVampire (talk) 07:59, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure about the other website. I wanted to add it myself but decided not to. I think we should discuss it on the PC talk page. GleekVampire (talk) 08:33, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes off course.Pks1142 (talk) 08:38, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

Small req
Hey Pks great to see your edits improving day by day and you are taking everybody's advice. WE have one small request, per WP:SKIN, can you tone down the pink of your userpage and user talk page to a lighter shade? It is very diffficult ot see what we typed or signed against the loud colored background. I think TheSpecialUser already sent you the message above. — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 10:16, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem, IndianBio. Sure gonna do that.Pks1142 (talk) 10:28, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot :) — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 10:45, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Pks, I will start a sandbox for the Chopra awards list and clean it up for you to take it to FLC. Seeing List of awards and nominations received by Alicia Keys, thats the way to go. — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 14:07, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Hey Pks, I have watchlisted the sandbox and will start working on it formatting, referencing, honing it to perfection. If you want to add any link, I would suggest that you add the content in the talk page of the sandbox so that we don't edit conflict while saving the content. You understood right? — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 14:48, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

PC section headings
The headings are named based on her personal critical success, not necessarily that of the films. It takes a bunch of people to make a film successful, not just her. Based on what you said, there would only be one paragraph for debut in '02, one paragraph for setback in '07 and half of '08, and the rest all success? Come on! She doesn't need us to make her look good, so lets's not exaggerate things. A hundred people could come with a hundred ways to group the info and title it. You want to start a big debate? BollyJeff &#124;  talk  19:23, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
 * How about beginning up to before MSK is 'Debut and breakthrough', current 'Breakthrough and setbacks' minus 04 failures becomes 'Success and setbacks'? That little section in 07-08 is too small for a section, and some of the films in 04-06 were stinkers, you cannot sat all were good or successful.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  19:49, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I put a compromise; have a look. I think there were too many failures in 07-08 to say just 'success', but too small to have its own section.  BollyJeff  &#124;  talk  20:37, 13 December 2012 (UTC)

FLC
Hi Pks. It's always great to see new editors take an interest in FLC, or any of the other content processes. I looked at the list you worked on and think it needs some more work before an FLC nomination. The main issue I see is that not all of the awards and nominations Chopra received are referenced. To allow readers to verify that information in an article is accurate, it really needs to be referenced. I imagine that the reviewers at FLC would oppose the list if more citations aren't added. Once you add more references, I recommend taking the list to peer review, which will give you a chance to get further advice before a nomination; this is very useful for first-time nominators who haven't worked on featured content before. Good luck with the list! Giants2008 ( Talk ) 15:33, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I took a quick look at your sandbox and while it looks better in terms of references, I still think it needs more work. For example, the second sentence is "Born in Jamshedpur, India, on July 18, 1982 and raised in many cities across India and beyond", which lacks a subject (Chopra). I also see some grammar issues in the lead and some awards/nominations that still need citations. Again, I strongly recommend starting a peer review, which will allow for more input from the community. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 01:48, 17 December 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey! I reverted your edit coz I'd already fixed the tables. Your format was wrong. Secondly, we need to discuss the changes on the talk page with the other regular editors. GleekVampire (talk) 09:35, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
 * You're welcome.. Instead of just copy-pasting the work from your sandbox I think you should make the changes one after the other. That way, I can undo the mistakes without reverting all your edits at once. GleekVampire (talk) 10:09, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Sure I'll do that. Don't remove any nominations right now. I'll need to double check all them. GleekVampire (talk) 10:29, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
 * DON'T remove any awards from the list! I have reliable sources for all of them. I'll add them later when I have time. I'm a little busy at the moment. GleekVampire (talk) 11:00, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I'll make all the necessary changes. Thank you for pointing out some of the mistakes. She was nominated for the Star of the Decade award. There's a very reliable reference for that. Also, don't trust the wiki articles coz most of them are updated by random people and not the regular wikipedia editors. I have reliable references for all the awards. I'll add them in a while. GleekVampire (talk) 11:11, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Which article am I supposed to edit? The actual one or the sandbox? I'm confused. — Indian: BIO  · [ ChitChat  ] 11:14, 17 December 2012 (UTC)

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Revertion of my edit
Hello, May I Know Why are you reverting my edits on Priyanka Chopra page. I am her Biggest Fan. She is a singer also. Im adding because I saw same infobox on Rihanna page. Don't revert my edits.106.218.9.29 (talk) 09:38, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Who are you to tell me that. It's not a fan site . She has not received more success in singing than acting. she is yet to make a mark as a singer. Pks1142 (talk) 09:30, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * You dont have to make me learn. I know everything. So, tell me how I can contribute to Wikipedia. Could you explain all the important Details about Editing.106.218.9.29 (talk) 09:38, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I think Jim has cleared everything ond still you wanna know then, read the Five pillars on Wikipedia.Pks1142 (talk) 09:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * OKK106.218.9.29 (talk) 09:43, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I had read everything and I don't need your suggestion. Now, I would edit according to me and You can't Revert my edit.106.218.9.29 (talk) 09:57, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Do what you want and Dont waste my time. If your edits will be good then No one will ever Revert and when they would be Unsourced or against any rule on wikipedia then everybody will revert your Edit.Pks1142 (talk) 10:03, 23 December 2012 (UTC)

Merry Christmas
Thank you. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 04:18, 25 December 2012 (UTC)


 * You should at least wait for the award shows rewarding the best performances of 2012 to finish. It's early and if you nominate it now, you will end up doing twice more work than that required if you nominate it after the award shows. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 15:42, 25 December 2012 (UTC)


 * A sincere advice I would give you is to concentrate on your revisions and exams. Do it after your exams. You won't get marks for this FLC. Study well. Jivesh 1205 (Talk) 16:04, 25 December 2012 (UTC)

Chopra filmography
Well, I do not understand what would possess you to work day and night on this. I am highly against this move. I see no reason to put directors, budgets, and grosses of every film in her article. That's why we have links to those articles. I also would like to have all her films here and not have to go to another page to find them. Some actors have many more films than her on their own page. I also don't care a bit about J.Lo; and her article is not even a GA. Let's see what the others say who you wrote to, but from me its a no. Sorry. BollyJeff &#124;  talk
 * I agree with Bollyjeff. It's totally unnecessary. Gleek Vampire (talk)  00:32, 26 December 2012 (UTC)

I did not mean to be rude, I was just genuinely shocked by the amount of work you put into this, especially since you have the FLC going on, and somewhat saddened that you are still trying to add new stuff when what is really needed is some more improvements to the main article. I already had to remove the names of the schools she attended in USA due to lack of sources, and I suspect that the same may happen to the schools in India for the same reason. Right now we only have one reliable source, and that is via Highbeam, which not everyone can see. We really need to find some more reliable sources for the early life section, maybe even in videos where she is talking about herself. I wish you would use your energy toward that end. It is also maybe more appropriate to compare this article to other Indian actress FAs such as Preity Zinta and Vidya Balan rather then Hollywood celebrities. BollyJeff &#124;  talk  15:01, 27 December 2012 (UTC)

Re:Need your help
Hi Pks. Why don't you start off by reading this article. It's quite informative; if you have any doubts later, you can ask me. Cheers. :) -- smaro jit  (buzz me)  06:19, 27 December 2012 (UTC)