User talk:KristenRoberts

Welcome!
Hello, KristenRoberts, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Social media and television
Hi! I just wanted to explain some of my edits to the paragraph you added to Social media and television. On Wikipedia, we try to aim for an encyclopedic tone, which means (among other things) that generally the second-person pronoun "you" should not be used, and "we" should be used with caution, and a global perspective should be taken (e.g. not everyone would be aware that the NFL is American, and not everyone's nation is the United States, so "the nation" is vague). Also, there is no need to sign your edits in mainspace. (Some other minor things I did include removing the space before the reference, changing the heading to sentence case, and templating the references.) Hope I didn't disrupt your project, and have a nice day! Me, Myself &#38; I (☮) (talk) 19:43, 6 December 2017 (UTC)