User talk:Kristenibrahim/sandbox


 * I really liked your section of the evolution of hyperparasitism, I thought it adds a significant amount of info to the page
 * Maybe trim the example portion-it does get a little wordy.
 * Future formatting can make it easier to read, like with headings and subheadings.
 * Overall, a good draft.

Hello! I have a few additional comments:

- In your first sentence you should end with a hyperparasite, rather than hyperparasitim (which is the phenomenon). -Avoid using quotes. Instead, write in your own words and reference the information. - You should add more references in general to the draft - or at least cite your current references more frequently. - Add some sections to your draft. You may want to add an examples of hyperparasitism header. Agleichsner (talk) 16:31, 9 April 2018 (UTC)