User talk:Kristied519

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This article has an overdetailed plot summary. Please See WP:NOT--the article should describe the plot briefly in perhaps 2 or 3 short paragraphs at most, and discuss other things also: the publication history, and, especially, links to reviews of the books providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. Not user reviews from Amazon or anywhere, either. or publisher's summaries.

The summary is so detailed that perhaps it might have been copied from somewhere. It was also added as a single edit--perhaps you might have prepared it carefully off-wiki first, but it does make people wonder a little. We don't copy material from elsewhere first it's a copyright violation, but, even if you own the copyright and are willing to give us permission according to WP:DCM, the tone will not be encyclopedic and the material will not be suitable, just as here. If that's the case, make sure to remove all coped material and replace it my information written in your own words, avoiding also WP:Close paraphrase

Include only material that would be of interest to a general reader coming across the mention of the subject and wanting the sort of information that would be found in an encyclopedia. l. Keep in mind that the goal of an encyclopedia is to say things in a concise manner. The level I usually aim at for fiction is to write as if it were so someone who had missed reading one of the books, and wanted a quick fill-in about what happened.  DGG ( talk ) 23:45, 19 November 2011 (UTC)