User talk:KristinDunn/sandbox

Peer Edits

I think you did a very good job and I realize that there is some information about fireflies in Wikipedia, but I believe, it will be a good idea to add some of information in the introduction part and do you know anything about the eating habits (maybe you can do a section of it) and what about the life cycle I think that will be very nice as well

In the part of the light organs of fireflies What do you mean with the more derived taxa, do you think you can be more explicit with this? Can you put a link for the word “photocytes” from a wikipedia page

You need to put the citation here “In more derived taxa (such as Photuris), the tracheal system is made up of a cylinder, tracheal trunk, tracheal branches, tracheoles, tracheal twigs, tracheal end cells, and end cell processes”

Systematic Since this part its already in the Wikipedia publication it’s good that you add something else, can you mention which one are the 6 subfamilies? You need to add the citations for that part

It will be good if you can find any information about the phylogeny? Ancestors or any phylogenetic trees.

Overall very nice job you just need to add and fix somethings.