User talk:Kristina Mull

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Hi Kristina, I had a look at your Karen Wheeler article, since it is up for review again. Ooooh! You're so close! Your sources, imo, are now at least adequate. You've done what was asked for. You need to just check your tone for a bit more formality - you're a little too warm (as in friendly towards the subject) for an encyclopedia article. I so wanted to accept this, but other reviewers would have have taken me into a dark corner.... (must keep up the Wikipedia standard, you know!) Also, I would dump most of (not all) the YouTube sources. We reviewers all hate YouTube sources! Just keep one or two for illustration. Compare your article to existing artist bios on WP and try to meet that standard. If you have done all this and are still declined, message me on my Talk page and I'll try to fix it, ok?  David_FLXD  (Talk) 19:32, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! VIVEK RAI : Friend?  08:57, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Karen Wheeler, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Sionk (talk) 09:19, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
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