User talk:Kristinnmason

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standards (run-on sentence in sentence 1, odd phrasing sentence 4)

Language
Meets Standards

Organization
Exceeds Expectations

Coding
Exceeds Standards

Validity
Meets standards

Completion
Meets Standards

Relevance
Exceeds Standards (All is relevant, even the bit about Louis XIV)

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standard (Replace "their" with "its" in first sentence; Venice is a singular noun so the pronoun should be too. First sentence is a run-on; could be reworked into two separate sentences. Perhaps put "Hall of Mirrors" before the word Versailles, so you can avoid having to figure out if it's "Versailles' Hall..." or "Versailles's Hall...". "So that way" in the last sentence sounds a bit off... maybe take out "way" and see how that sounds.)

Language
Meets Standard (Not yet in an encyclopedic tone; perhaps you could shorten the sentences so each only has one fact (permitting). Using passive voice whenever possible also helps.)

Organization
Exceeds Standard (Logically organized and good flow.)

Coding
Exceeds Standard (As far as I can tell, it looks good!)

Validity
Exceeds Standard (Information seems legitimate.)

Completion
Exceeds Standard

Relevance
Exceeds Standard