User talk:Kristinnmason/dublin

2/28/18 Evaluation by user:Avictory
Spelling & Grammar: -spelling is fine. One problem: "It was discussed that..." isn't proper grammar; perhaps you could say "it was proposed" or something along those lines. Language: -good language, neutral tone, and sentences flow well. Also, I think you've improved on your writing. Last time you had really long, dense sentences but you've tightened it up here! Organization: -logical order. One question though: can you use the terms "Mayor" and "Lord Mayor" interchangeably? It was getting a bit hard to follow which term was correct after the sentence "The Local Government Act of 2001...". Coding: -I don't see any coding problems. All of the references open/work. Completeness: -the "politics" section is a bit lacking, but I think you're still working on it, so no big deal. Relevance: -all information is relevant. Citations: -great references! All sites look legitimate. The only problem I see is that the in-text citations appear in between the word and period. They should always appear after the punctuation.

Overall, I think you did a really good job! It was very well-written and easy to follow. Avictory (talk) 04:13, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

2/28/18 Evaluation by user:guyarv
Spelling & Grammar: Spelling looks good. I don't see anything explicitly grammatically incorrect, but a once-over to make sure you're speaking in the most concise way is always good.

Language: Nice, tight sentence structure. Professional and neutral.

Organization: Seconding the other evaluation's comment on "mayor" and "lord mayor" being used interchangeably. I am not sure. Otherwise, "politics"" as a header is a little vague, I might change it to "recent actions" or something like that.

Coding: Error in coding of citation 6 (though citation itself looks good).

Completeness: Politics section looks a little odd with only two sentences. Maybe you can break the above paragraph into two sections.

Relevance: All good here. Might add another example under "politics" for flavor.

Citations: References look good. Nothing dubious.

All in all, good work. I can't get enough of those Irish names.