User talk:Krisz at Dancing Nation

Kim Appleby
Hi, I reverted your edits on the Kim Appleby page due to:
 * your use of non-neutral point of view language (e.g. "tragically", "found worldwide success", "achieved huge chart hits...across the globe" (not entirely true for Mel & Kim as they didn't have major mainstream success in North America, for example), "remains a keen champion of songwriters' rights", "to sell-out... festivals around the country") - wikipedia is not meant to read like a press-release or a fan-site; the language used should be written from a neutral perspective. Try not to exaggerate or embellish an artist's achievements.
 * Technically, Mel & Kim were not "one of the first" acts to work with SAW. SAW had already had big chart hits (across the world) with "You Spin Me Round (Like a Record)" and "Venus" by that point, as well as other charting hits with Divine, Hazell Dean and Princess.  Yes, Mel & Kim were one of the earlier acts to work with SAW, but they were not among the first.  It doesn't matter that Pete Waterman (who is known for exaggeration/embellishment) said that Mel & Kim's success "gave (SAW) their career as producers", when it's not actually true.  They'd had a career as producers before Mel & Kim.  Yes, Mel & Kim no doubt helped increase their popularity in Europe, but they were already established as producers by that point.  Both Dead Or Alive and Bananarama sought SAW out, before Mel & Kim, because they wanted their sound.  If anything, Mel & Kim may have helped SAW establish a profile as songwriters, as they gave SAW the first #1 single that they had written themselves.
 * your incorrect use of referencing. References should be added to the article itself, in-line, to support the statements made, and not in edit summaries. If you need assistance with learning how to reference on wikipedia correctly, try using the teahouse for new editors, or take a look at the wikipedia referencing page.

The information you've added could be re-added to the article, taking these factors into account.Nqr9 (talk) 02:11, 11 January 2020 (UTC)