User talk:Krosa5/sandbox

Article Evaluation

Evolution of Ageing

Many of the sections did not contain cited sources. The information needs to be backed up and contain a lot more sources. Many of the sources were out of date. Some citations did not take me directly to the source. (ex. source #7) Not all facts were referenced with an appropriate, reliable source.

The article did not contain a neutral tone throughout. The tone of the article seemed to have personal feelings involved in some sections of the article.

There were some grammar and some wording issues throughout the article.

--Krosa5 (talk) 23:24, 28 January 2019 (UTC)