User talk:Kroylli/sandbox

Hi folks! TeacherHart here

I started reading through your article. I'm noticing a lack of references. It is difficult to offer feedback and checks without knowing what is speculation and what is factual. For example, you said that recent tests show that there are signs of water pollution. Are you referring to the tests we have done? or do you have other information? If it is our tests, we have to be careful because 1. We have not yet done a full analysis of our results and 2. We have not published our results. We may need to contact Lianna for some help with this.

You've also indicated that the water has different colouring to indicate the ... i;ll be back