User talk:Ksachs123/Black howler

Black Howler Sandbox Review
After reading the article, the first thing I noticed was the lack of citations. There seem to be internal citations, but no attached cite within the paragraph or citations at the end. In addition, I think the third sentence about activity range does not have much context and appears as a fragment, you could possibly add some more information to the sentence. The beginning of the fourth sentence was also a bit confusing in what is trying to be said, maybe reword this? Lastly, I believe the ending sentence could be placed somewhere else in the paragraph and add a better concluding sentence to wrap it up! Overall, good information and has potential! (also missing where this paragraph would be placed in the Wikipedia article) Cclay10 (talk) 04:03, 16 October 2023 (UTC)