User talk:Kspyle/The Honey Bee in Kansas/Bibliograpy

I think you have a good start to your article. I would encourage you to proofread your article for grammatical errors. Your lead section is good, I feel like I have a good grasp of what your article is about. I also think you have a clear structure throughout the article, I would just expand on the body of your text. When writing in your tips and tricks section, I would just make sure not to have any biased text and keep a neutral point of view. All of your sources look reliable as well. I would also advise you to keep citing your sources that you use in the body of your text. You could also add an image. Overall a good start to your article just proofread and add more content! Nicoleheim98 (talk) 02:19, 3 April 2021 (UTC)