User talk:Ksturgisjensen

AfC notification: Draft:Bhavna Mehta (2) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Bhavna Mehta (2). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 21:47, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bhavna Mehta (2) (May 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 21:48, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Bhavna Mehta has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Bhavna Mehta. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 21:49, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

Recent edits to Graciela Iturbide
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Graciela Iturbide, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you! Materialscientist (talk) 21:51, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

Bhavna Mehta
Although Draft:Bhavna Mehta (2) was declined, it has promise. The long profile in San Diego's largest and most reputable newspaper, and the similarly in-depth piece from the oldest public broadcasting station in Los Angeles (the latter written by a long-time professional art critic), are technically enough to pass the general notability guideline. However there are some aspects of the draft that could be strengthened. I made a start with some modest changes. I'll follow up with more, or at least a detailed explanation of suggested changes, in the next few days. --Worldbruce (talk) 06:29, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Bhavna Mehta


Hello, Ksturgisjensen. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Bhavna Mehta".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ― Abelmoschus  Esculentus  08:40, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Bhavna Mehta (2)


Hello, Ksturgisjensen. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Bhavna Mehta".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. &#8213; Susmuffin Talk 19:02, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bhavna Mehta has been accepted
 Bhavna Mehta, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Worldbruce (talk) 20:00, 22 November 2018 (UTC)
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Ways to improve Bhavna Mehta
Thanks for creating Bhavna Mehta.

A New Page Patroller Rosguill just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:

"Good work, it just needs some copyediting for tone."

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can reply over here and ping me. Or, for broader editing help, you can talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.

signed,Rosguill talk 20:23, 22 November 2018 (UTC)