User talk:Ksullivan0/Climate change in the Philippines/Bibliography

Plan
I will be editing the "Impacts on People section." In my edits I will be looking at the "Risk to 'double exposure' " section and the "Health Impacts" section and will be adding a section on land grabs and tying it between these two blocks of text.
 * Hieup (talk)hieup: I think that an additional paragraph on land grabbing should fit better with the section "Economic Impacts", esp. between the subsection "Agricultural production and civil conflict" and "Gender disparities among farmers." You might want to add that paragraph below the subsection "Gender disparities among farmers." In this way, really think about focusing on the kind of materials that helps you connect the topic of "land grabbing" to the theme of "climate change."

Comment on selecting sources: Hieup (talk) 22:21, 13 March 2022 (UTC)hieup

Comments on Selecting Sources
If you still plan to write a section on land grabs, I think a better place to add it should be under the section "Agricultural production and civil conflict." Also, when it is possible, I would like you to highlight the theme of climate change impacts.
 * Source #1 is a good source, but it is a bit too broad (It does provide some good references to Southeast Asia). To have an overview source, I suggest you looking into the following one (esp, from pg. 703: Schoenberger, Laura, Derek Hall, and Peter Vandergeest. "What happened when the land grab came to Southeast Asia?." The Journal of Peasant Studies 44, no. 4 (2017): 697-725. This article is an Introduction to a special Issue on the Journal of Peasant Studies that focuses on land grabbing in Southeast Asia. At least, make use of the article on the Philippines in this Issue: Montefrio, Marvin Joseph F. "Land control dynamics and social-ecological transformations in upland Philippines." The Journal of Peasant Studies 44, no. 4 (2017): 796-816. Use source #9 for the same purposes.
 * Source #2- I agree. You don't want to use this source.
 * Source #3: If there is reference about ASEAN and the Philippines, you might consider to use it. You have had a plenty of other sources on the Philippines.
 * Source #4 & 6 are good. They were written by the same author, so you might have seen some overlapping. Try to use other sources to highlight multiple perspectives - if possible.
 * Source #5: Focus on the analysis of Sierra Madre, Philippines.
 * Source #7 & 8 can provide specific case studies.

Next steps: 1) Clean up your bibliography by bringing the sources you will use to the top of the list. I would like to see your revised bibliography before March-19 (Saturday). Source 4, 6, 7, 8 (and even #5) are providing case studies. If they are too many, you can select only 2 case studies to write in your Wikipedia paragraphs. 2) Start to work on your Draft in your Sandbox Draft. Make sure you've carefully read the guide on your Sandbox Draft how to copy and paste materials in this sandbox. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hieup (talk • contribs) 13:08, 21 March 2022 (UTC)